my response to sir's evil notes :D

• use SCRIBD for the rest of my work
• use the correct media terminology
• when doing work add in the notes taken
• make sure to hand in work in on the deadline 
• expand on the work i have done and do in depth 
• make sure to analyse using camera, mise-en-scene, sound and editing (for primeaval work and coming down the mountain)

Camera, mise en scene, sound, editing for opening sequence of coming down the mountain.

Story board