What went well with what you have written is that you were able to back up your answers from the point you made. For example you talked about the dipping brake line, then you mentioned that it will create suspense. Another good thing is that you talked about the colours that were used which use mentioned there's a blackness to it which suggests death. You also mentioned sound and the characters within the opening sequence.
It would have been better if you talked about how powerful the sound can be against the video and what the purpose of it is.
You've analysed the opening in a lot of detail and you showed understanding of the different shots and scenes. It could be improved by expanding your thoughts on how sound was effective and why the director chose to do start the film in this way.
Well done Marwa, some well written analysis with a close eye on detail and a good attempt to apply media terminology in the process. As others have said, it is a common failing to gloss over the use of sound and actually this is one of the most powerful elements. well done for using SCRIBD.
What went well with what you have written is that you were able to back up your answers from the point you made. For example you talked about the dipping brake line, then you mentioned that it will create suspense. Another good thing is that you talked about the colours that were used which use mentioned there's a blackness to it which suggests death. You also mentioned sound and the characters within the opening sequence.
ReplyDeleteIt would have been better if you talked about how powerful the sound can be against the video and what the purpose of it is.
Well done though (-:
Great job - you've used your thoughts effectively and show a clear understanding of the scenes.
ReplyDeleteEBI: In your paragraphs, you've used commas where you needed to use full stops - Keep that in mind!
Good Job and Well Done!
You've analysed the opening in a lot of detail and you showed understanding of the different shots and scenes. It could be improved by expanding your thoughts on how sound was effective and why the director chose to do start the film in this way.
ReplyDeleteWell done Marwa, some well written analysis with a close eye on detail and a good attempt to apply media terminology in the process. As others have said, it is a common failing to gloss over the use of sound and actually this is one of the most powerful elements. well done for using SCRIBD.
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